Monday, March 16, 2015

The World Until Yesterday- a review

Why review a book of social/biological science [NOT “sociobiology”] in a writing blog? Because this is HIGH CONCEPT, that’s why!

Also because Jared Diamond writes so well.

There is a big difference between information and communication. Many science writers only do information. Diamond does communication.

Personally, I prefer his GERMS, GUNS, AND STEEL, perhaps because I read it first, several years ago, and usually an author’s first book, the one you read first, remains the favorite, because it was new to you, and opened up new possibilities, but THE WORLD UNTIL YESTERDAY: What We Can Learn from Traditional Societies is definitely worth the read. [Viking, 2012] And for writers, there is a very interesting chapter [10] on language.

This is not a Luddite anti-modern screed, but a thoughtful look at traditional societies and the things we can learn from them, about child rearing, elderly care, war, and all the other major concerns of human society in any age.

John Robert McFarland

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

Author guru Kristen Lamb says that author blogs are counter-productive, that a blog must be “high concept.” I have no idea what that means, but just forget about JUST WORDS being an author blog and consider it ‘high concept.”

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ in Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/


Sunday, March 15, 2015

In 150 pp, Something Should Happen-a quote

“If I’ve read 150 pages, I have a right to expect something to happen!”

Helen Karr McFarland


John Robert McFarland

Saturday, March 14, 2015

Should You Inform An Author You Have Used Their Work?

In my other blog, Christ In Winter, for 3-11-15, entitled “Send Your Cousin to a Conference,” I told the story of how someone took the ideas I wrote in an article and turned them into a lecture series and a book. He acknowledged me, but did not inform me. I would not have known about it had not my cousin been at the conference. The question arose for authors, which I asked in that CIW blog, Do we have an obligation to inform someone whose ideas we have used? If you are looking for an answer, you probably won’t find one there, but it’s sort of an interesting story to read.


John Robert McFarland

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

Author guru Kristen Lamb says that author blogs are counter-productive, that a blog must be “high concept.” I have no idea what that means, but just forget about JUST WORDS being an author blog and consider it ‘high concept.”

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721.

Friday, March 13, 2015

PASTRIX-a review

I’m not sure about reviewing Pastrix here. Nadia Bolz-Weber subtitles this “memoir” as the cranky beautiful faith of a sinner and saint. Religious people may find it more cranky than beautiful, for Bolz-Weber, a Lutheran pastor and founding pastor of The House for All Sinners & Saints in Denver, uses a lot of profanity, in the book as well as in her preaching, and she accepts into her church a lot of folks who do not fit the usual description of religious. She is much more into grace than works, to use the Lutheran definitions of those words.  Non-religious people may find it interesting but be put off by her commitment to religious acceptance in the midst of any chaos.

This is a blog about words, though, and she uses words so well. Not surprising, I suppose, for someone who made her living as a stand-up comedian while she was rebelling against her strict, fundamentalist, anti-woman upbringing with a life of booze, drugs, and promiscuity, what conservative Christians call “building a testimony.”

If you love words and good story-telling, this is well worth the read, even if you are not interested in Nadia’s move from fragmentation of life and soul to a shaky but defiant faith. The stories are so well told, and the people in them are so interesting.

Published by Jericho Books in 2013.

John Robert McFarland

I write of my personal reaction to reading Pastrix in my Christ In Winter blog for Feb. 11, 2015. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/2015/02/pastrix-past-tricks.html

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

Author guru Kristen Lamb says that author blogs are counter-productive, that a blog must be “high concept.” I have no idea what that means, but just forget about JUST WORDS being an author blog and consider it ‘high concept.”

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721. 


Wednesday, February 18, 2015

A NAME SHOULD FIT THE AGE

Oops. I said on Monday that I would continue the series on naming characters on Tuesday, specifically how to make the name fit the character, but I forgot and posted a review of Karin Fossum’s Eva’s Eye instead. I hope you did not misname a character while my brain and half-baked ideas were absent to guide you.

Sometimes I go to restaurants where they ask for your name so that they can call it out when your food is finally ready. “John” is a good name for someone who is old and bald and white-bearded and extremely good looking. I do not tell the child behind the counter that my name is John, though, because when they call that out later, half the old men in the place will jump up and try to get my food. A long time ago, John was a cool name, so that’s how all the cool babies were called. Now it’s a “forever” name, in that every generation will have some babies named John, but it’s not a cool or trendy name. It’s mostly an “old” name, so it fits characters like I. [“I” doesn’t sound right, but I think it is a predicate nominative, isn’t it?]

To protect my food from predator Johns, I give a different name to myself for the occasion, a name to the kid behind the counter, a name no one else will have. No one would believe me if I say my name is Dustin or Trent. Also there may well be Dustins and Trents there waiting for food. I need a name no one else has. So I tell the kid behind the counter, who is wearing a name tag that says Dustin or Kristel, that my name is Ambrose or Oscar. There is hardly ever another one of those in the place.

One day I forgot what I wanted to be called and told the college girl [Yes, I know she’s a woman, but at my age, she’s also a girl.] to give me a name. She immediately said “Rumpelstiltskin.” She enjoyed it so much that she kept bringing me free food so that she could sing out as she came to my table, “You forgot something, Rumpelstiltskin.” She thought that was an appropriate naming of my character. Or else she was a kit lit or folklore major, which explains why she is working in a restaurant.

A character’s name needs to fit the age. If I tell you a character is: Beulah, Betty, Barbara, Bo, Belle, Becca, you can probably follow right down the age range, from 90 to 15.

In addition, if a character is major, she needs a memorable name. When I wrote a book for my granddaughter in her senior year of high school, I chose Bronwyn for the heroine. It’s different, memorable, and cool. If she is an ancillary character, give her a name that does not compete with the main character, something nice but common, like Mary or Brunhilde. OK, maybe not Brunhilde…

Oops, too many words for a “high concept” blog. More tomorrow.

John Robert McFarland
johnrobertmcfarland@gmail.com

Well, “tomorrow” is a moving target at the moment. Sometimes you are short on time and internet connections, which may be true for me the next four or six days. I try to post here every day, for personal discipline and sanity and enjoyment. Also, I think that if you are kind enough to come by on any day, looking for something new, there should be something new. Feel free to come back by any day; there may be something new, if I have time and internet. If I don’t, I look forward to that “tomorrow” when we can share a few minutes.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I hope you never need a cancer book, but if you know someone with cancer, you might give them a copy of NOW THAT I HAVE CANCER I AM WHOLE. Paul K. Hamilton, MD, the co-founder of CanSurmount, called it “The best book for cancer patients, by a cancer patient, ever.”

Tuesday, February 17, 2015

EVA'S EYE--a review

Kate Atkinson and Karin Fossum are similar writers, similarly excellent writers, each from a north land, each with a similar detective, who, like every other crime novel detective is middle-aged, divorced or widowed, single but looking, jaded but still trying. Both Atkinson and Fossum are intrigued by how one event leads to another, but Atkinson wants to see how one event leads to another in action. Fossum wants to see what happens inside the character’s brain as one event follows another. Atkinson looks outside; Fossum looks with the inward eye, in this case, Eva’s Eye.

Eva’s eye has so many dimensions. She is a painter, with a unique way of trying to find light in darkness. She is also able to see many possibilities, how Michio Koku describes human identity, “the ability to simulate the future,” an ability animals lack. Eva definitely does not lack it. She sees so many possible futures, for her daughter, for her father, for her friend, for her self, for revenge.

This is the first of Fossum’s Inspector Sejer novels. Apparently daughter Mary Beth read my many whines about always receiving the 2nd in a series before the first when I receive a gift book, and so she went clear back to 1995 to get the first in this series, although I would not have been able to read it until 2002, because that is when James Anderson translated it from Norwegian.

I don’t ready many Norwegian crime writers, although if we lump Scandinavians together, as Americans tend to do, we could include Sweden’s late Steig Larrson, [The Lisbeth Salendar Girl With the Dragon Tattoo series], because there aren’t many, to my knowledge, besides Jo Nesbo, and yes, I write these convoluted sentences so that your brain will be exercised so well you won’t get dementia in old age. Nesbo is excellent, but dark. I like Fossum better. She’s certainly not “light,” but like Eva as she paints, Fossum thinks there is light that is worth looking for.

It’s tricky to read a translation. If you are confused, you’re not sure if it’s because of the author or the translator. I suspect translator James Anderson is British, for at more than one point the characters use the word “shan’t.”

It’s always a little harder to follow a foreign work. Unless you have been there, you don’t know the layout, and you don’t know how much a kroner is. When someone pays a thousand kroner for something, is that a lot, or is it like Italian lire?

That’s part of the fun of reading a foreign author, though. You get to be some place different, have to figure out how much a kroner is worth or if a Figueroa is a small or large car.

One of the confusing aspects of writing/translation in this book is the concept of size. Everyone keeps referring to the setting as a “small” town, but at one point the detective figures a trip to see a witness will take him 30 minutes. In my thinking, it will never take that long to get somewhere in a “small” town.

Inspector Slejus is appealing, but actually a minor character in this novel. Yes, it’s his series, and he solves the crime, but this book is really about Eva, and her eye. Note to daughters: I look forward to getting to know Slejus better in subsequent novels.

Eva’s Eye is a really good read.


John Robert McFarland

This started as an author blog, but writing guru Kristen Lamb says author blogs are counter-productive, that blogs need to be “high concept.” I have no idea what that means, but this blog is now high concept.

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2015.

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ in Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/

Monday, February 16, 2015

HOW TO NAME CHARACTERS 2

Yesterday, in response to Black Opal Books’ question on FB as to how we name characters, I told how I remember the names of my characters as I write. Today, how do we help our readers remember which character is which?

I don’t know how Alistair Maclean ever remembered the names of his characters himself. I certainly couldn’t tell one from another. He named them all alike. The men were always Henderson, Peterson, Swanson, Johnson, et al son. Maclean was a fabulous story-teller, especially his WWII novels, like The Guns of Navarone and Where Eagles Dare. I could never keep the guys straight, though, unless I read Maclean in German, like Angst ist Der Schlussel, which I did to try to improve my German. I was so busy struggling with the Deutsch that I didn’t care which son was which. Mein Deutsch is sehr schrelich.

Maclean’s women were even worse. He named every one of them, in every book, Mary. [In all fairness, I do think he had a Marian once.] In one book he even named a Mary and a Mary 2, and blamed it on the characters. According to Maclean, since they were both Mary, Nelson and Henderson and Johnson and Gunderson dubbed them Mary and Mary 2, as though Maclean had nothing to do with naming them both Mary in the first place.

The key to helping the reader is to identify each character, regularly, by something other than name alone. That’s especially true if a character has not showed up for a few pages. Rather than just Chuck Shaw, or Shaw, say: “County Sheriff Shaw,” or “Sheriff Shaw,” or just “The Sheriff.” His position, profession, tells the reader more than his name does, especially if he is “fifth business.” [1]

Sometimes physical description helps the reader. “Beulah, the woman with three eyes,” or just “the woman with three eyes” reminds the reader quickly just who you’re talking about.

Tomorrow, making the name fit the character, so that the reader has a better chance of identifying the character even without a job category or physical description.


John Robert McFarland

1] A phrase used mostly in play writing. There is the hero, the sidekick, the woman, and her best friend. Everyone else is “fifth business.”

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

Author guru Kristen Lamb says that author blogs are counter-productive, that a blog must be “high concept.” I have no idea what that means, but just forget about JUST WORDS being an author blog and consider it ‘high concept.”

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ in Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/

MY OTHER BOOKS:

NOW THAT I HAVE CANCER I AM WHOLE: Reflections on Life and Healing for Cancer Patients and Those Who Love Them [AndrewsMcMeel & HarperAudio, with Czech and Japanese translations] Paul K. Hamilton, MD, the co-founder of CanSurmount, called it “The best book for cancer patients, by a cancer patient, ever.”

AN ORDINARY MAN [HarperPaperbacks] Randall MacLane just wanted to be an ordinary man. But sent with a message for Custer, he became a drifting lawman with a knack for killing, and a deep well of loneliness. Then a twist of fate brought him full circle…

THE STRANGE CALLING: Stories of Ministry [Smyth&Helwys] I didn’t want to be a preacher, but I made a deal with God to save my sister’s life. Was that really a “call,” though? I said, “I’ll try t for 50 years, and if I still don’t know, I’ll do something else.” These are stories of what happened in those years of questioning the call.

WHEN FATHER RODE THE MAIL and Other Stories of Christmas [lulu.com] ISBN 978-1-300-38566-0

If you like baseball poetry, take a look at “Frosty & the Babe” http://www.baseball-almanac.com/poetry/frosty_and_the_babe.shtml