Tuesday, February 3, 2015

THE LUMINARIES-a review


In The Luminaries, [Little, Brown, & Co, 2013] Eleanor Catton is a very young author [born 1985] who writes in a very old way. The combination is illuminating.

Catton is the totally omniscient narrator, as total as it gets. She not only tells us the actions of each character, but why they are acting that way, from childhood on. It’s sort of like reading Thackeray’s Vanity Fair.

The Luminaries was published in 2013, when she was 28. She probably started writing The Luminaries when she was about 23. Considering the amount of research that must have gone into it, and the work to get the voices just right, it’s a remarkable tour de force for such a young author. It certainly deserved the Man Booker Prize it nabbed in 2013.

Her first novel, The Rehearsal, was her 2008 master’s thesis at Victoria U in Wellington. She also received a fellowship to the Iowa Writer’s Workshop.

The Luminaries is set in the 1866 New Zealand gold rush. It is a combination historical, mystery, astrological, psychological… something. I don’t mean that in a bad way; I just can’t think of the proper word. It’s not mish-mash or confetti. Catton is a good string-of-beads story teller.

The conclusion is a bit disappointing, ragged and unfinished feeling, but most novel endings are a bit of a letdown. Maybe that’s why the book feels about a hundred pages too long. [Take out a hundred and it would still be a very long book for its type.]

Catton, in the old fashioned way, tells us at the start of each chapter what will occur in it. Toward the end the “contents” for each chapter are longer than the chapter.

I seem always to read the second book of a bright new author before the first, which in the case of Catton was The Rehearsal. This is because my daughters don’t give me an author’s first book. This 2nd book was a gift of Mary Beth. But Catton is a gifted author. I look forward to reading her first book second.


John Robert McFarland

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2015.

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

In case you missed it, a Tweet Repeat:

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ in Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/

MY OTHER BOOKS:

NOW THAT I HAVE CANCER I AM WHOLE: Reflections on Life and Healing for Cancer Patients and Those Who Love Them [AndrewsMcMeel & HarperAudio, with Czech and Japanese translations] Paul K. Hamilton, MD, the co-founder of CanSurmount, called it “The best book for cancer patients, by a cancer patient, ever.”

AN ORDINARY MAN [HarperPaperbacks] Randall MacLane just wanted to be an ordinary man. But sent with a message for Custer, he became a drifting lawman with a knack for killing, and a deep well of loneliness. Then a twist of fate brought him full circle…

THE STRANGE CALLING: Stories of Ministry [Smyth&Helwys] I didn’t want to be a preacher, but I made a deal with God to save my sister’s life. Was that really a “call,” though? I said, “I’ll try t for 50 years, and if I still don’t know, I’ll do something else.” These are stories of what happened in those years of questioning the call.

WHEN FATHER RODE THE MAIL and Other Stories of Christmas [lulu.com] ISBN 978-1-300-38566-0

If you like baseball poetry, take a look at “Frosty & the Babe” http://www.baseball-almanac.com/poetry/frosty_and_the_babe.shtml



Sunday, February 1, 2015

MANY BOOKS-ONE BRAIN

My reading method drives some people, many of them in my family, crazy. I read 20 to 30 books at the same time. Many are literally “page a day” books. When I have a read a page from each of my books each day, I choose the one that I need to think about some more on that particular day as my “rest of the day” book.

I would probably do this just as a reader, because it’s the way my brain works, but it’s fruitful for me as a writer to keep a conversation going in my brain among not just many writers but many areas of thinking.

At the moment I am reading:

FICTION:
The Historian, Elizabeth Kostova
The Four Stages of Cruelty, Keith Hollihan  
The Husband, Dean Koontz
The Lincoln Myth, Steve Berry
Death in Nostalgia City, Mark S. Bacon
Fear Nothing, Lisa Gardner

NON-FICTION
The Opening Kickoff, Dave Revsine
Pastrix, Nadia Bolz-Weber
The Journal of John Wesley
Stories that Have Shaped My Life & Ministry, John Killinger
Outsider Baseball, Scott Simkus
The World Until Yesterday, Jared Diamond
A Generous Orthodoxy, Brian McLaren
The Future of the Mind, Michio Kaku
The Making of the Atomic Bomb. Richard Rhodes

POETRY
Aimless Love, Billy Collins
The Pocket Book of American Poems, Louis Untermeyer, Editor

RECENTLY COMPLETED

The Luminaries, Eleanor Catton
Seven for a Secret, Lindsay Faye
The Boson at the End of the Universe, Sean Carroll
The Elegance of the Hedgehog, Muriel Burbery
The Truth about the Harry Quebert Affair
Dubliners, James Joyce
Hummers, Knucklers, & Slow Curves edited by Don Johnson 
Run, Andrew Grant

My replacement method, when I have finished a book, is simple. I choose another of the same genre, or whatever my wife and daughters gave me most recently for Christmas or birthday or Father’s Day.

Try it; you’ll like it. Or maybe not.


John Robert McFarland

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

My novel, VETS, will be published by Black Opal Books in early 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ in Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/

MY OTHER BOOKS:

NOW THAT I HAVE CANCER I AM WHOLE: Reflections on Life and Healing for Cancer Patients and Those Who Love Them [AndrewsMcMeel & HarperAudio, with Czech and Japanese translations] Paul K. Hamilton, MD, the co-founder of CanSurmount, called it “The best book for cancer patients, by a cancer patient, ever.”

AN ORDINARY MAN [HarperPaperbacks] Randall MacLane just wanted to be an ordinary man. But sent with a message for Custer, he became a drifting lawman with a knack for killing, and a deep well of loneliness. Then a twist of fate brought him full circle…

THE STRANGE CALLING: Stories of Ministry [Smyth&Helwys] I didn’t want to be a preacher, but I made a deal with God to save my sister’s life. Was that really a “call,” though? I said, “I’ll try t for 50 years, and if I still don’t know, I’ll do something else.” These are stories of what happened in those years of questioning the call.

WHEN FATHER RODE THE MAIL and Other Stories of Christmas [lulu.com] ISBN 978-1-300-38566-0

If you like baseball poetry, take a look at “Frosty & the Babe” http://www.baseball-almanac.com/poetry/frosty_and_the_babe.shtml

Saturday, January 31, 2015

Updike or Bellow?

Who is the greatest novelist of the 2nd half of the 20th century, Updike or Bellow? I say Updike. 

Friday, January 30, 2015

A Good Reason Not to Submit

A publisher announced they wanted mss. I had one of just the right genre. I looked at their details. My ms was too long by 20 k words, too many to revise. I was relieved. I didn’t have to send it.

I know, I know. Submitting is part of the process. So is getting rejected. So is marketing once you get published, and maybe before, “building your platform,” which sounds more like preparation for diving or ski jumping. Come to think of it, ski jumping is a good image for submitting manuscripts.

I know a short story writer who says he gets published more than other writers not because he’s a better writer but because he’s a better submitter. “I have the next periodical or publisher cued up from the moment I have submitted to the last one. On the same day a rejection comes, I submit to the next one on the list.” I admire that. I hate doing that.

I like writing. I like having written. I like getting published. I like people telling me I’m a great writer. I just don’t like that step in between the writing and the accolades. Maybe I’ll write about that so I can put off having to submit...

John Robert McFarland

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ In Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/

A PLUG FOR ONE OF MY OTHER BOOKS:

AN ORDINARY MAN [HarperPaperbacks] Randall MacLane just wanted to be an ordinary man. But sent with a message for Custer, he became a drifting lawman with a knack for killing, and a deep well of loneliness. Then a twist of fate brought him full circle…


Thursday, January 29, 2015

TOOTIE-HEADS

When our granddaughter was in kindergarten she returned home one day ashen-faced.

“Something happened,” she told her mother. “It’s so bad I can’t tell you.”

“No, that’s okay. It’s always okay to tell your mother.

“Louis said something.”

“What?”

She whispered. “He called Alan a tootie-head.”

“What does that mean?”

“I don’t know, but it must be bad, because Teacher sent him to the principal’s office, and he never came back.”

At this point, should I explain what tootie-head means, or let you figure it out for yourself?

That’s always an issue for an author. Not everyone who reads a piece knows all the meanings. Like most old people, I now read in the areas of sociobiology, brain research, and quantum field theory. None of them are my native tongue. I appreciate it when Wilson or Koku or Carroll explains a term. I’m also aware that they can’t do every one, that I, as the reader, have to make some assumptions, or do some dictionary work.

Lindsay Faye, in her Seven for a Secret, provides a helpful glossary to the lingo of Irish immigrants and the newly-founded police force, the copper stars, and the criminal underworld in 1840s NYC. I did a glossary for my The Strange Calling. A glossary is one answer if you are writing technically, or in fiction, in an area where it is not reasonable for the average reader to understand.

I have recently read James Joyce’s Dubliners, his first book, short stories of the Dublin of a century ago. Now only is the language 100 years old, but much of it is Irish slang of the time. I get enough of it, though, to feel the poignancy of these stories.

So, explain tootie-head or not? I think I’ll let you figure it out.

John Robert McFarland

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

In case you missed it, a Tweet Repeat: Not everyone will be cured, but everyone can be healed.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ In Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/

A PLUG FOR ONE OF MY OTHER BOOKS:

NOW THAT I HAVE CANCER I AM WHOLE: Reflections on Life and Healing for Cancer Patients and Those Who Love Them [AndrewsMcMeel & HarperAudio, with Czech and Japanese translations] Paul K. Hamilton, MD, the co-founder of CanSurmount, called it “The best book for cancer patients, by a cancer patient, ever.”


Wednesday, January 28, 2015

THE MOON ROSE

Titles are important. They should inform and invite and incite with intrigue and insight and ingenuity. In other words, you should be the little ingine that could.

Use words that everyone likes. People like moon and rose, so they should be included in titles. In fact, you can just use Moon Rose every time. It works for every genre. Thriller? The Moon Rose Conspiracy. Mystery? The Moon Rose Murders. Religious? The Moon Rose Revelation. Romance? The Moon Rose Lover. Works every time, and you don’t have to spend time thinking up a new title but can concentrate on more important things, like checking the sales rank of your book on Amazon. [The answer is 2,183,762.]

But if Moon Rose doesn’t work for you, you can practice book and article and story titles with the subject lines of emails. They should both inform and intrigue. I’m surprised by the number of writers and other mortals who either don’t title their emails at all or just keep hitting reply so that the subject line eventually reads re:re:re:re:…ad infinitum. [Actually, Ad Infinitum might be a good title.]

I spend a lot of time on email titles, because I want to be sure they are read. If I want to tell Howard that my turtle died, I can simply inform, “my turtle died,” [in order to save time in typing, since I have used so much of it in thinking, I rarely use capitals in email titles] which is okay, but if my turtle died because it stuck its tongue into an electrical outlet while trying for an ant, I could use the title, “mourning becomes electric.” Howard is bound to read that.

Authors should practice creative titling in all that we do. Get in the habit of thinking intrigue in every title. “The one who is faithful in email titles will be successful in book titles.”

If you get an email from me with “the moon rose turtle” on the subject line, be sure to read it.


John Robert McFarland

Daughter Katie Kennedy’s Learning to Swear in America will be published by J. K. Rowling’s publisher, Bloomsbury Press, in 2016.

My novel, VETS, about four handicapped and homeless Iraqistan veterans who are accused of murdering a VA doctor, will be published by Black Opal Books in 2015.

I tweet as yooper1721.

I also write Christ In Winter: Reflections on Faith from a Place of Winter for the Years of Winter. http://christinwinter.blogspot.com/

TODAY’S FEATURE FROM AMONG MY TITLES:

NOW THAT I HAVE CANCER I AM WHOLE: Reflections on Life and Healing for Cancer Patients and Those Who Love Them [AndrewsMcMeel & HarperAudio, with Czech and Japanese translations] Paul K. Hamilton, MD, the co-founder of CanSurmount, called it “The best book for cancer patients, by a cancer patient, ever.”



Tuesday, January 27, 2015

Double Standard Trouble?

I write to keep myself “off the streets and out of trouble.” Of course, I do not mind if my characters get onto the street and into trouble. Is that a double standard?

JRMcF